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High Park station, Toronto subway.
I generally don't take picture of people I don't know; here it's for a photo assignment at :iconphoto--assignment: : it is "Waiting" [link]

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Juuust missed the focus on this! You've got some great elements here and it's obvious you were aware of in-camera composition, though I think you might have misjudged where the large pillar was going to be in the image?

The pillar is a bit distracting and if you have the original, I'd suggest trying a crop that would make it less pronounced. Perhaps cropping in a unique size (if this is an 8x10 crop, maybe a 5x10 would be appropriate?) from the left of the image to where the pillar is, or to the middle. It would make the woman the main focus and the feature we see first.

Having said all of that, I really enjoy the wide range of tones here and the contrast, while a bit dark, is appropriate. I'm also drawn to the lines - love subways for the same reason. Well seen!
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April 7
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Canon
Canon PowerShot A640
1/20 second
F/3.5
22 mm
Apr 7, 2009, 9:26:38 PM

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